Sunday, July 4, 2010

Kohl-eyed-oH-me

Yes, the window is clear. Tainted with droplets of the bygone. But clear. Perceived through the kohl of contemporary circumstance. But clear. Some droplets run down the kohl creating a spectrum of greys. But clear. I see! See the clear blue sky. See it with signs of a looming storm. And see the barren open fields with the promise of an impending blossom. I see people and things in reverse roles. I see joy and sorrow, each coming from the other. I see hope in despair and kindness in misery. I close my eyes, my kohl-lined eyes. And yet I see. I see so clearly. I am but a spot on the melange called universe. An enviable spot indeed. A potent spot, if not more. Because the world’s not without. The world is within. So I see it. So I see me, see me clearly with oh! my kohl-eyed mind, I see kohl-eyed oh! me.

21 comments:

  1. Dam good.. just loved it... super duper

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  2. Amazing! its so good i dont wont to add anything but can I add the quote that; Every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don’t always soften the bad things, but vice versa the bad things don’t always spoil the good things and make them unimportant. Always strive to add to other peoples pile of good things.

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  3. by governing urself, u can govern the world... :)Nice piece indeed, luking fwd to reading more of ur stuff ! Happy writing ! :)

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  4. i remember creative writing classes in school and the teacher saying "go deep..analyse the surface and always ask questions.."...this first post reminds me of those valuable pointers that make a simple prose so much richer! good stuff!! :-)

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  5. I love it that it is full of hope and optimism. Very Phoenix like, rising from the ashes like. And I love the shades of gray.

    Looking forward to more such beautiful pieces.

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  6. i so loved it.. whtever it means pls explain we meet..(he hhheeeeeeeee,, just kiddin..)
    pls write more of it and make a compliation.. good work..
    please continue writing ..

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  7. thank you everybody!!! this is really encouraging... keep following, commenting, suggesting and i promise to keep writing!!!

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  8. Good one Mayuri ....... Beautiful ...... Creatively written yaar ......

    Waiting for next blog

    :-)

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  9. wonderful! That's like Matu. Keep writing!

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  10. Nice... kohl-lined Eyes speak Volumes!!!

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  11. Hey It is so good.. I love to read what you write....

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  12. Jhakkas! Khupach chhan!! Likhate raho--ham padhate rahenge--enjoy karate rahenge!!!

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  13. its really good yaar! looking forward to more of these...

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  14. Harshal dada, Aaee, Priyanka, Shruti, Prakash Sir, Sanjay Sir and Samata thank you so much! I am definitely going to keep writing. In fact my next post is up already. I hope you all enjoy it as well...

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  15. hey really nice, enviable post.. :)


    Namit,
    My SPacE- Wen i was a boy

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  16. wow..... just browsing through your piece and came to know its not just a "piece" but half-a-ton pancake or a couple of dozens of paavs with the same quantity of bhaaji.... now the question is how to eat all those pav with same quantity of bhaaji ??? I think you made me think and is pretty evident from my explanation.....
    ...... happy writing !!!

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  17. Thanks Namit!
    Atul, I think I understand what u r trying to make me understand, to which I can only say thanks!

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  18. Terrific!! Every time I read it I discover a new flavour.

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